Wk 8 – Activity – Edit Writing

The classmate I am doing the edit on is, Aida Gonzalez. I looked over Aida’s week 8’s artist conversation, and could not find any technical mistakes. Her work proves that she is a strong writer and understands the value of editing.   In addition, her discussion on her chosen artist is solid. It is comprised of five paragraphs, introducing who the artist is, giving a brief background, and then following the criteria on how to write the discussion. Her post also include a variety of pictures regarding the gallery, giving a great insight to what she viewed on Thursday. Overall, I believe Aida is a solid writer and should continue with the work she has been doing.

Snapchat dinner
Snapchat dinner

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