The classmate I am doing the edit on is, Aida Gonzalez. I looked over Aida’s week 8’s artist conversation, and could not find any technical mistakes. Her work proves that she is a strong writer and understands the value of editing. In addition, her discussion on her chosen artist is solid. It is comprised of five paragraphs, introducing who the artist is, giving a brief background, and then following the criteria on how to write the discussion. Her post also include a variety of pictures regarding the gallery, giving a great insight to what she viewed on Thursday. Overall, I believe Aida is a solid writer and should continue with the work she has been doing.